2011年10月14日金曜日
CA Blogging Assignment 5
My topic for essay 2 is organ transplantation. I chose this topic because I've become interested in organ transplantation after I watched a movie called "Reposition Man" whose story is about organ trafficking. I believe organ transplantation is nessesary to be performed because many patients are dying due to the malfunction of their organs. However, there are some problems entailed by performing organ transportation. Therefore, my working thesis statement is "to perform organ transplantation appropriately and help many people in Japan, the Japanese government has to take action and solve some problems which arise from organ transplantation."
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so your thesis should be like 'because of the reason dadada... Japanese society should do blablabla... to help those in need of organ transplantation'. But then you should come up with several new ways to satisfy people, which seems a little hard...or you can borrow some strategies used in other countries!
返信削除yes, as Lyla said, I think you should clarify what you meant by "action," "problems." To come up with specific examples, you just have to research a lot so it shouldn't be too much of work =]
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